chilledlem0n's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Mushroom Maker]

YOUR ANIMATION IMPROVED LIKE 900000000000000 TIMES MORE SINE LAST TIME I COMMENTED IT IS SO AMAZING TO SEE USERS IMPROVE I FEEL HONOURED.

Taliwacky responds:

Glad you liked it. Its good to hear I have improved. I hope to keep getting better. :)

['Allure' Nude - Speedpaint]

Nice artwork! Have you considered putting it onto the art portal (if you haven't already)

Good video, though if sped up a tad more, could cater to the attention span of the internet, but that is my opinion.

You are an amazing artist btw k cool bye

~chilledlem0n

JeffLafferty responds:

Thanks, I've thought that too. I appreciate the feedback.

[destiny]

the button doesn't work instantly - should fix that.

Also, you should definitely try and attempt not tweening so much. Mix tweening and fram by frame, but this is just tweened stills (not the greatest animation style). Good luck on improving!

flashmakeit responds:

I will try and improve by fixing that button. If I can. Thanks for watching I may try just frame animation in my next cartoon. So stay tuned to my page.

[I wasted your time]

Pointless - good animation, and I see why it is pointless.

Try make your own audio next time. (also audio goes out of sync after second loop)

Probably will get blammed, sorry to say - but well done!

Ryanimations responds:

Please don't congratulate me on that.

[A Dragon Birthday]

Needs subtitles or better voice acting - i understood none of what the upside-down dragon was saying, but the joke was good - not new, but still a very good joke!

Good job!

Sonicyay2 responds:

I am planning on getting a better microphone.

And it wasn't new?

darn it...

["Our Contents" - An animated metaphor]

I really enjoyed this! The human contents was pretty disturbing, I think the rating could maybe hit an M for that, but leaving it as Teen works as well, there's way worse stuff out there.

Good animation, good direction, amazing metaphor, and I am very happy to see some dark comedy!

Nice work!

Alyxandr responds:

Yeah, I wanted to include video of a man shooting himself, but I didn't want to go THAT awful because I also wanted to post this to YouTube (also, I don't think I could've stomached that.)

And thank you!

[Game Grumps Animated: EY BUB!]

CHANGE THE VIDEO COMPRESSION!!!!!!!

^Apart from that, nice work on this.

AwkwardTom responds:

I'm trying to figure it out by uploading the video again in a different format, but nothing's happening :(. Can you give me some tips?

[Lance and the Magic Bucket]

Don't understand it looping.

I find this pretty good actually, obviously stuff to improve on, but that's the case with all animations.

Really good work!

TheNathan responds:

Fixed the looping issue. Thanks for bringing it to my attention!

[Police Brutality Trailer]

The game seems like it would be a lot better, but this trailer does not sell me the game in the slightest.

I liked the footage in the background, but the art doesn't agree with me (but that is only opinion), and I think you have something really good going on

(PS: Sorry for rating it 1 pico, I meant for 2 but a book fell on my hand when I went to click (not joking)

[Kitty Kombat "Cat Fight"]

Tweening animation doesn't bode well unless used incredibly correctly. This was an example of a simple animation that was very difficult to sit through to the end.

Pros:

>I enjoy the Mortal Kombat Music
>Cats and eyepatches work very well

Cons:

>Tweening animation done very slowly, which never works especially used in a simple way like this
>Intro was far too long
>Cat meowing was also very long
>The creepy guy sequence was also very long
>Voice acting was not especially that amazing
>Creepy guy's arms, if animated in that was should go behind the body, it looks much better
>Fight sequence looked very out of place and did not utilize voice acting or anything established with the cat meowing and guy screaming food.

I don't know if you were trying to copy a somewhat style of South Park, but it really did not work. Tweening does not work well until combined with some elements of frame by frame animation, unless done exceedingly well (See Rick and Morty as a prime example of this).

Sorry for tearing this to shreds, but this was not pleasing to look at or enjoyable to listen to in any way, shape or form.

You probably worked very hard on it, and maybe with improvements here and there, you may be able to create a very good animation.

Taliwacky responds:

Thank you for taking the time to give me some feedback. I still learning and your information has helped greatly. Maybe check out my Grocery Guy video and let me know if i improved.