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CHANGE THE VIDEO COMPRESSION!!!!!!!

^Apart from that, nice work on this.

AwkwardTom responds:

I'm trying to figure it out by uploading the video again in a different format, but nothing's happening :(. Can you give me some tips?

Don't understand it looping.

I find this pretty good actually, obviously stuff to improve on, but that's the case with all animations.

Really good work!

TheNathan responds:

Fixed the looping issue. Thanks for bringing it to my attention!

This is amazing and it loops fantastically well done

This is really amazing!

Funny and nice blend of animation and live action. I don't have much else to say about it, other than I enjoyed it very much.

Very well made, and the lip syncing is very good! Well done!

The game seems like it would be a lot better, but this trailer does not sell me the game in the slightest.

I liked the footage in the background, but the art doesn't agree with me (but that is only opinion), and I think you have something really good going on

(PS: Sorry for rating it 1 pico, I meant for 2 but a book fell on my hand when I went to click (not joking)

Tweening animation doesn't bode well unless used incredibly correctly. This was an example of a simple animation that was very difficult to sit through to the end.

Pros:

>I enjoy the Mortal Kombat Music
>Cats and eyepatches work very well

Cons:

>Tweening animation done very slowly, which never works especially used in a simple way like this
>Intro was far too long
>Cat meowing was also very long
>The creepy guy sequence was also very long
>Voice acting was not especially that amazing
>Creepy guy's arms, if animated in that was should go behind the body, it looks much better
>Fight sequence looked very out of place and did not utilize voice acting or anything established with the cat meowing and guy screaming food.

I don't know if you were trying to copy a somewhat style of South Park, but it really did not work. Tweening does not work well until combined with some elements of frame by frame animation, unless done exceedingly well (See Rick and Morty as a prime example of this).

Sorry for tearing this to shreds, but this was not pleasing to look at or enjoyable to listen to in any way, shape or form.

You probably worked very hard on it, and maybe with improvements here and there, you may be able to create a very good animation.

Taliwacky responds:

Thank you for taking the time to give me some feedback. I still learning and your information has helped greatly. Maybe check out my Grocery Guy video and let me know if i improved.

I enjoyed it, but that was only because I enjoy the Shia meme thing.

Pros:
>Animation was well constructed
>Last 10 seconds or so was very funny (to me anyway)
>Voice acting was good

Cons:
>Shia I could hear very clearly without changing my speaker volume, but the Freddy and Foxy voices were too quiet
>Shia is very over-used
> Went very slow-paced for my liking

All up, it was a good animation - with a few tweaks and whatever, this could be very good on Newgrounds, except the Youtube joke at the end. This humour and animation is best shared on YouTube I feel.

Good luck for future animations!

RockerFaceAnimations responds:

Thank you very much! I Appreciate your constructive criticism instead of saying "This video Sucks!". And I will agree that the Shia meme is very overused. And the animation was very slow paced. I Hopefully will be able to fix those errors for future animations. Thank you! :)

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